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    criminal

    you must be a criminal
    I see you coming and going
    when you please
    taking little pieces of my heart
    adding up over time
    for a better part of a whole
    and you are so clever
    like a thief in the shadows
    keeping out of streetlights
    as if i wouldn't learn of you
    tsk tsk
    shall I mask myself in the near
    behind a bush or tree
    just out of sight of your eyes shots
    I'll step when you step
    as you parade shadey
    I'll gather your maneuvers
    so I can "steal my loot"
    before you do

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    Artie commented on criminal

    08-28-2009

    I like this. It has the "Cat & Mouse" feel. The question is, which are you? 10 from me.

    HarverTomsson commented on criminal

    08-21-2009

    You are a sly one, stalking with intent. Something like, "it take's one to know one..." Well conceived and executed.

    optimistic commented on criminal

    08-04-2009

    Very well pul in to simple terms on how love can be so criminal, interesting way of putting it.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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