Crimson Darkness

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    Crimson Darkness

    Blood pools at my feet,
    from the gaping hole in my chest.
    A hole that you made when you placed that knife to your wrist.
    The darkness had swallowed you whole,
    as it now tries to devour my soul.
    Your blood still stains my hands,
    no matter that I wash my hands time after time. Because of your darkness I have fallen from where I once was.
    Now we are together,
    blood to blood,
    darkness to darkness.

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    wamomo commented on Crimson Darkness

    12-20-2009

    Deep, dark, and very intense...seething with powerful emotion....good job depicting how someone else can effect us so dramatically...keep up the good work! : )

    MarionYost commented on Crimson Darkness

    12-18-2009

    This one's awesome as well. you paint vividly with your words. dark.. i Like it :) All the best -Marion-

    kpeery09 commented on Crimson Darkness

    12-17-2009

    very nice this is like very dark and very detailed where i can paint a picture and all that but not really paint-paint you know im bad at that...but yes I give you 10.

    aveya commented on Crimson Darkness

    12-17-2009

    I do like the crimson dripping blood the very anger and self sacrfice found in this poem, dark and ruthless...good poem

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