Crying a River of Pain

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Crying a River of Pain

It’s a good thing to have

A good cry

I’m crying a river of pain

My Muse

My turmoil of mental madness

Is in pain

Lost in the rain

I make him insane

My feelings don’t matter

Not aloud to feel

I’m lost

Cold

Crying in the rain

Silently crying a river of pain

Going insane

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gogant commented on Crying a River of Pain

06-04-2010

I hope the dam doesn't burst......with all that crying, and raining too, could bring a flood that may drown the pain..............You do make music with your musing.......................................gogant

bluskyinthenite

06/04/2010

ha ha ha thanks gogant.. thank you for reading my write..

lonewolf commented on Crying a River of Pain

05-22-2010

Life isnt about waiting for the storm to pass. It's learning to dance in the rain. Very well written.

bluskyinthenite

05/23/2010

Thank you very much for reading my poems... I love to dance in the rain.... nude @ that Ha.. Its my birthday and feeling sassy

mustascheman commented on Crying a River of Pain

05-10-2010

It's sad how pain can be so painful. Although I'm not sure where the pain is coming from. I just hope you have enough tissue..good write. A.T.

bluskyinthenite

05/10/2010

he he yes thanks good morning World

alb29oclfl commented on Crying a River of Pain

05-08-2010

loving makes us all a little insane, nice flow and i cry in the rain to

bluskyinthenite

05/08/2010

Thanks... much appreciated

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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