RAPE !!!!

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http://www.myspace.com/karma884 I NEVER BIN RAPED. I ALMOST HAD A CLOSE CALL TWICE.
WHAT MADE ME WRITE THIS POEM IN SO MUCH ANGER. WAS THE NIXMARY CASE. THIS POOR LIL GIRL WAS ABUSED IN THE WORST WAY SO WHEN I HEAR ABOUT A LIL GIRL OR YOUNG WOMEN BEATING TO DEATH. OR RAPED AND KILLED IT  MAKES ME SOO ANGERY. SO THIS POEM IS TO YOU LADYS

RAPE !!!!

I CRY FOR WOMEN AND YOUNG GIRLS TODAY & I WEEP FOR THER PAIN.

LIL GIRLS COME OUT NEVER THE SAME.
DAMAGED AND HURT TRUST BROKEN TOOK FOR GRANTED INNOCENT'S LOST.

RAPED AS IF IT NEVER HAPPEND.

AS SHE BLEEDS FROM THE IN SIDE AND OUT HE DOSNT HEAR THE WORD OUCH.

HE DOSNT CARE THAT SHE CRYS HE JUST TELLS HER CLOSE UR EYES.

THE DEVIL HIDES AND SAYS ITS A LIE. YOU SAY A WORD LIL GIRL AND

YOU WILL DIE

BUT NO 1 HEARS THESE

LIL GIRLS CRYS.


THESE WOMEN AND LIL GIRLS

BEATIN LIKE A DOG'S ON A CHAIN LEFT OUT SIDE IN THE RAIN.

HIDE THER BRUISE AND OPEN CUTS IT FEELS LIKE FLAMES.

FEELIN LIKE A SLAVE STUCK IN RUT.

ANGERY & IN PAIN AND STANDIN STILL...WHEN WILL THIS PAIN HEAL.

YOUNG WOMEN BEIN PUT TO REST

BECUZ THER HUSBANDS & B/F'S BEAT THEM TO DEATH.

LIL GIRLS PUT THER LIFE AND TRUST ON THE LINE.

THESE ADULTS HURT THEM AND ITS A CRIME.

ONLY TO BE TAKEN AND

NEVER BE SEEN AND HEARD FROM AGAIN.

DEAD IN THE STREETS WHEN WILL IT END.

YOUNG WOMEN RAPED AND MURDER THER DIGNITY & THER LIFE TAKEN FROM THEM.

AND NEVER GET IT BACK BECAUSE THAT SON OF A B^TCH TOOK ALL OF THAT.
MEN NOT UNDERSTANDIN THE WORD NO!. NOT RESPECTING.

WHAT WAS TOLD.

NO MEAN NO! SO LET GO.WOMEN TO TRUSTING AND

NIEVE...MURDERED ....THER BODY'S FOUND @ THE SCENE.

TELLIN THER STORY'S AND LIFE LONG DREAM'S.

TAKEN BY GREED.
AND TO FILL HIS NEED.


NOT REALIZING GOD SENT US TO BEAR THE SEED.

AND THATS THE THANX WE GET.?
AND NOT HEARIN OUR MERCY AND OUR PLEAD.
THESE EVIL RAPEST AND MURDER'S PETIFILES WILL PAY 4 THER SINS.
THER TIME WILL COME WHEN THER TIME ENDS.THEY'LL BURN IN HELL AND THEN THEY'LL FEEL THER VICTUMS PAIN.

I HOPE THEY DO.BECAUSE THIS TIME ITS OUR GAME

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By Karma

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orsonav commented on RAPE !!!!

11-08-2009

Wow! This poem is written with much conviction. You take the reader to a place where he is forced to live inside the world of a young lady that has been taken advantage of. You should submit this poem to some of the shelters that help women coup with being raped. It could be used as a healing device for those women.

countrypoet commented on RAPE !!!!

11-04-2009

Thank you for sharing and empathizing with these victims.It sickens me every time I hear about one of the monsters that do somthing like this.With powerful imagery and good wording you have written a message to the public and to the monsters,who commit these crimes.I agree 100% with the ideas offered here.Any man,who beats a woman or commits a crime like this is the lowest form of scum on the earth.

mdpoetgirl commented on RAPE !!!!

10-20-2009

Full of emotion. Great the way you worded this! A powerful message to empathize with rape victims and give rapists a piece of your mind. My only suggestion would be to clean it up a bit with spelling and punctuation. It'll read so much better. Great job!

Tempestlady commented on RAPE !!!!

10-14-2009

In Turkey rapist balls are cut off and sewed up in their mouths while they are put downtown on display for the little boys of the city to see. Rape there is non-existent anymore. Just an FYI. Nice try, good emotional portrayment, but to one who has been raped many times, the elements are not quite right, but a very nice work. Write on......

jesusfreake commented on RAPE !!!!

10-14-2009

this poem is so beautiful...i wanna send u a pm to explain how this makes me feel...

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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