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  • shakeme4life
  • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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Praying for a love blessed from above ...

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When i get married , i'll know indeed,
my union will be blessed with spiritual seeds.
I prayed to my heavenly father to custom make me for you,
so remind me of this, each time, any other i try to pursue. 

I asked that you be strong , yet loving,
dependable , and caring.
I asked that your love for me ,
would grow stronger with each passing day.


I ask that your faith be so strong ,
nothing can break it .
Nothing could bring you down.


I prayed that  he'd send you with a renewed spirit 
and sound mind.
That he'd grant you the knowledge to
get us through our binds .


I prayed he'd endow you with a sense of humor,
so you won't get overloaded .
That he'd fill you with the power 
of the holy spirit.


I prayed he would give you just enough 
courage, to make sound fair decisions.
That you'd feel obligated to always
tell me the truth.


I prayed that he'd give you emotions , 
to feel my love , pain, joy.
and make you sensitive enough
to feel hurt when you hurt me.


I prayed he'd design you with enough room
to support & encourage me.
That you would always feel the need 
to take great care of me .


I prayed he'd bless you with the wisdom needed
to evade sinful temptations.
and to be sure of yourself , through out 
the doubting ,and hating .


I prayed he'd guide you as our head.
that he'd teach you to respect yourself 
and others.
that he'd make you faithful , 
and able to endure our storms.



I prayed he'd make you just empty enough , 
for only my love to fill .
and a deligent worker to pay our 
bills on time.


I prayed that he'd kiss you with a touch of 
romance . 
To show me you love me at your every
chance.
 

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Customed built

06-21-2011

You deserve this man! I loved your clarity and your dumping of emotion in this poem. It's like a wish list love letter for your meant to be partner. Good job!....E

shakeme4life

06/22/2011

Lol ,, you have learned me well , in this writing arena ... like i need every star to shine a little brighter , as they absorb my wishlist tonight...

gregster commented on Customed built

06-17-2011

nicely done hopefully you get that.do this though read simple love on my list..you might relate.

shakeme4life

06/17/2011

Simple love ... does it exist ... all my years ... lol ... thank you i'm gonna stop by and read it ...

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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