Cuts

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Cuts

 

The pain

The agony

The slice

The blood

 

The feeling of a paper-cut

Will drive you to tears.

But not for long.

The pain of yesterday will wash away

 

Relief of the end washes over me

The beginning of the end

Let the count down begin

 

One of the most painful

experiences of my life

I knew would end soon

But then in that case why did it feel so bad?

 

Life

Lets you feel the pain

Wirth in agony

Slice up your life, friends, the world of today

Then leaves you to bleed till you can stop it

 

The pain will end

The agony will fade

The slices will be sown

And the bleeding will stop

As fast as it came my life will stop

 

 

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blvdobd2009 commented on Cuts

08-23-2010

that poem reminds me of the cuts that left there mark on my skin, when i felt that agony, longing to be healed of yesterdays pain, wow you bring up such vivid imagery, and allow me to go deep into the hidden recesses of my mind, wow...

brokenhearted11 commented on Cuts

07-21-2010

very nice. i used to cut as well, and its jsut...im not sure, addictive i guess. beautiful piece. keep writing :)

Emy717 commented on Cuts

02-23-2010

thank but this is writen about my seventh grade year which was nit very dep but i just realy didn't like school

Rhymer commented on Cuts

12-24-2009

For thirteen your poetry is deep and full of meaning. Well written piece. 10 from me.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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