dad

tears roll down my face staining my cheek
I don't want to cry,I don't want to seem weak
but it's so hard to do when I think about what I had
the absolute funniest most amazing dad
I cant believe that you are really gone
it's all so unreal to me
daddy there's somewhere you need to be
with your loving family
you should be out fishing
I shouldn't be left here wishing
wishing I could hug you one more time
leaving me at 18 is simply a crime
everyday I'd wait for you to get home from work
some days you'd be taking forever driving me beserk
finally I'd see you come through the back gate
I'd greet you at the door, and ask why you were late 
on weekends we'd watch t.v
you'd sit in the recliner and fall asleep
snoring so loud and talking in your sleep
I just want you back home
but I just tell myself your happier now
a cold beer in your hand 
sitting in the nice cool sand
your pole is in the water 
the bobber just shot to the bottom
a fish is on your line
so is it selfish of me to ask for some more time?

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labitch commented on dad

12-09-2010

I actually really like this!! I'm giving it a ten, because it really got to me. I don't hand those out often, NICE job!

winterkou commented on dad

12-06-2010

What a nice tribute to your dad, sounds like you tow weer close and did alot of fun things together , I feel the emotion in this write it's hartd losing somebody so close that you really love. You long for one more moment with him but you have to wait , you will get to be with him up above one day.

Musicmynded1 commented on dad

09-07-2010

Nice uplifting write for a sad time among urself... ty for sharing with us.

Artie commented on dad

09-07-2010

Wow! You have written a beautiful piece here - 10 from me

jesterescapade commented on dad

09-07-2010

Very well written. Heart felt and memorable. I can feel the pain.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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