Daddy dear

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  • Sadness
    • harmony74
    • is wondering if i will ever do another poem.hmmm,

    Poem Commentary

    To my drunkin dad...

    Daddy dear

    Oh Daddy dear,
    Did you hear?
    Oh daddy dear,
    Did you ever wipe a tear?

    Oh, Did you know when I was low and needed you near?
    You tried to play the hero, but to all of us your  a drop dead ZERO.
    Go be with the swine, better yet, pass out from wine..
    maybe a pill, that would destroy and kill.
    Suck them down left and right,
    From Mornings Dawn til late at Night..
    Go Jump in your grave,
    For this is the road you chose to pave.
    You took for granted what the Father gave....

    oh, daddy dear..

    Watch it, because your making your end be near!

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    Oblaidon commented on Daddy dear

    04-01-2010

    My definition of a poet is someone who can convey his or her emotions making me feel what he or she feels. Sweetie, you are a poet. These words cut deep.

    icu2 commented on Daddy dear

    01-10-2010

    Wow-KAPOW!!!! DON'T STOP WRITING....it will only get better, and better as you go girl! POWERFUL, AND FELT!

    charles52 commented on Daddy dear

    01-10-2010

    Harmony74: Honest, very honest, giving it great power. Thanks for sharing. Charles

    dumplin commented on Daddy dear

    10-23-2009

    Oh, I definitely feel this poem! Nicely expressed!

    dahlusion commented on Daddy dear

    10-20-2009

    A powerful and haunting write with so much darkness, beautiful darkness, that holds the reader.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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