DAMN You Look Good!

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  • FLAWLES
  • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

Poem Commentary

I walked into McDonalds;  and there she was behind the counter.  OMG!  I said to myself.

DAMN You Look Good!

Excuse me.  You look like you’re Latina  Please help me if I’m wrong

 

I think, you are a beautiful young lady;  and wondering where you come from.

 

That, jet-black hair.  Those, full-firm, pretty lips

 

Only because, all I see is your face, I can’t compliment on your hips.

 

 

Hold-on!  Enough of that.  I’m not trying to disrespect

 

It’s just everything about a female is her beauty.  If I’m wrong, please correct.

 

Again, your nationality is my question;  and I’m not offended if there’s no answer.

 

It just looks like, one drop of your blood, would be enough, to cure cancer.

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GucciGurl commented on DAMN You Look Good!

07-04-2009

You must read my work called color. Because the question that you are asking here is what I get ask all the time. My daughter gets so mad because ppl ask . what she is because she looks like what you describe above. Yes she does have a latin father but she does not like to be defined by her looks or race. Her answer is always " I am human . What are you an ass hole!" LoL She is a strong willed person. .

FLAWLES

07/04/2009

You know something GG? I'mma keep it real. She must be attractive. We wouldn't even waste our time if she wasn't. Actually, it doesn't really matter if we're told or not. It was an excuse for conversation; and conversation gives us a reason to continue looking at what is attractive to us. So, tell her all we're really doing is admiring the beauty. Know'm sayin'?

AbysmalGoddess commented on DAMN You Look Good!

07-02-2009

You had a sideways smile across my face by the end of this one... You wrote it so creatively and playfully, with no vulgarity or disrespect... I love this!

FLAWLES

07/02/2009

Thank you for your comments. By the time I got back home from MikkeyDees, I sat down and started writing.

boriquamorena commented on DAMN You Look Good!

07-01-2009

Hispanic causing panic or just your breath being taken away?This was very good.

FLAWLES

07/01/2009

Panic wasn't all she caused; and yes, she took my breath away. Thank you for your compliment; and have a beautiful day.

jademelissa74 commented on DAMN You Look Good!

07-01-2009

Very nice LE$! It was a sister huh? NIcely written! Good Job! .

FLAWLES

07/01/2009

She didn't tell me; and I still didn't get a chance to see that uh, nevermind.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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