Dancing♫ with a Broken Heart


  • Zombie6622
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Dancing♫ with a Broken Heart

♫I will sit here
until you rise
from your place
and come save me
♫here we go
this is my confession o
a lost cause, past the point of no return
im such a hypocrite
with every move i cry
the dance floor
is bumpin with the sickest beat
but here i am
hyperventilating tragedies
im such a bore to you
with every move i cry♫
♫ive destroyed what i could get
from me, you'll get a serious kick♫
chorus---(♫wishin' on a  star to come save me now
one million chances to be wrong
im crazy no?
dancing with a broken heart♫
♫hoping for the gold rush of my life
while i'm staring down the barrel of a gun♫
♫can't believe this happening to me
can't believe this is how it outta be♫
♫I just wish...i could kiss...
that man before i roll the dice...♫)
♫When did I become so obnoxious?
Fucked up twice, lies that you caught me in
Trust me, I'm paying for these
psychotic messed up lies♫
♫In the end Im just a zombie
Soaking in the blood on the carpet
you find me wasting there
now every move you die♫
♫i have destroyed your mind
its gone
karma is sick its all my fault♫
♫here i am
at my own funeral
looking down
cause i am without you
but I see you there
with every move you [cry---x16♫

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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