Dancing With You

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    Dancing With You

    Walking beside you in the still of the night
    So peaceful and quiet in the shimmering light
    Holding you close to me, the whole blessed night through
    It feels like I'm dancing with you

    Sway to the music as the owl sings his song
    Your head on my shoulder our passion so strong
    If ever a moment when a heart beats for you
    Its when I'm dancing with you

    Your lips feel so soft, as tenderly we kiss
    We're lost in a moment of heavenly bliss
    Open your eyes love, my heart beats for you
    It feels like I'm dancing with you

    Sway to the music as the owl sings his song
    Your head on my shoulder our passion so strong
    If ever a moment when a heart beats for you
    Its when I'm dancing with you
    Its when I'm dancing with you
    Its when I'm dancing..... with you

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    EyesOfRain commented on Dancing With You

    09-02-2012

    I could hear this becoming a hit song. Love the words. Paints a breathtaking picture. Gorgeous.

    lonewolf

    09/02/2012

    Thank you very much for the comment. To be honest, it is a song. This is the first song I ever wrote.

    REGINA2 commented on Dancing With You

    10-25-2010

    Love this poem, lonewolf. I believe you said it was a song. Quite beautiful.

    sammia commented on Dancing With You

    01-27-2010

    Beautifully written Lone. Loved it I will be adding this to my favorites.

    Madelynn commented on Dancing With You

    11-02-2009

    This was so elegant.I love to read something that just makes me..feel. Its such an art to take a memory or feeling,so personal,and bring it to life for all who have the honor to read it!You have so done this,here. Beautiful flow,wonderfully visual.Just a joy to experience.

    JCKasper commented on Dancing With You

    09-24-2009

    If you had the choice ---- Would you have skipped the pain , by doing so ------- Missed the dance? Lyrics by Garth Brooks.... Challenges that confront or persuade us to dance!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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