Dangerous

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    • christianprep
    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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    True poem DAD does work to much, and spends less time with us because of it but thats okay i think its enough you could not ask any more from him, but this poem is a (Acrostic) so in saying that it is not a free style... so you see i hope you like it its a good one and i think nothing is wrong so please read and comment it?Acrosti

    Dangerous

    Daddy's at work not rest

    And works to hard

    Needs to come spend time with  his girls

    Going to church on Sundays

    Eating three meals

    Running out of ways to make his back feel better

    Oh we love him

    Under every thing i think we get enough time

    Sisters just need to understand

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Dangerous

    10-20-2010

    i like this! i really havent done an acrostic in years, i thought it childish, but you haveturned it into the exact opposite. great poetry, keep writing!:)
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    christianprep

    10/20/2010

    Learned it in school, could be used for a childs poetry book, which would not be to bad.... they teached this stuff when i was in school in English. thats partly why i begain to love poetry, so i understand and appricate your Insight on this poem.

    winterkou commented on Dangerous

    10-20-2010

    interesting really never tried to do this into apoem, but cool.
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    christianprep

    10/20/2010

    thank you

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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