daniel is loves name!

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    i wrote this for the wonderful man in my life, whom i love so much! he is my soulmate, my true love! he completes me!!! i love him more than words could ever explain!

    daniel is loves name!

    You found me when all hope was gone

    You loved me and called me “the one”,

    From my heart you pulled that knife

    That brought me back to life.

     

    All my dreams started to come true

    The day, the great day I met you!

    How could so much love fill my heart

    How could it be so wonderful from the start.

     

    Every breathe I take is calling out your name

    Every road I’m on brings me next to you again

    Your name is written on my veins,

    Your face is carved on my heart

    Your soul is forever linked to mine!

     

    Your joy is my joy

    I feel like a child with a new toy,

    Your tears are my tears

    With you I could cry for years

    Or laugh, or scream, or dream,

    Or just love, oh how I could love

    That pure soul, as white as a dove!

     

    With you I could touch the sky

    I could play with the stars up high,

    I could swim in the deep blue sea

    I could be anything I want to be,

    I could grow wings and fly across the world

    All you have to do is say one word

    And everything I am and will ever be

    Is due to the love you so freely gave me.

    So I do, I truly do

    I love you!!!

     

     

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    rougepriest commented on daniel is loves name!

    10-12-2009

    hi, its an ok poem a little drab, doesnt grab ya by the hair and yank.......sounds a bit desperate. i think the trouble is too many little words diluting it. most of the words are single syllable thats the problem, and those that arent are only 2-3, fix that and you have a better sounding poem, welcome to OP!

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