DARK

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    DARK

    When i see that tolerance
    tires flow in my eyes
    when i see that strong belief
    it gives me relief

    He again betrays that belief
    My heart cry's and falls asleep
    GOD will come to help as he said
    but i don't see him coming till am dead
    But i wish he comes and sees what we went through, all the
    DARK days and torrid nights which weren't blue

    let him come and see the pain of his heart
    let him see how it tore apart

    DARK is the sun for me
    Dark is the moon
    this darkness is making me swoon

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    vancelemley commented on DARK

    09-15-2009

    i can relate to this in so many ways, thanks for sharing something so personal, great read

    syed

    09/23/2009

    thank you soo much ........ i feel honored

    Abwino commented on DARK

    02-03-2009

    i couldnt help but read with passion, its a genius work. am in love ith it-especially 2nd stanza.

    syed

    09/23/2009

    thank you soo much for your comment!!!

    Corinna commented on DARK

    01-30-2009

    I feel you...

    drewking commented on DARK

    01-23-2009

    easily felt,, good work...

    Plot121 commented on DARK

    12-17-2008

    The flow was a bit choppy but the images were very well done. The only thing that I was not impressed with was the core message where was it Robert...

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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