Dark Path

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    Dark Path

    Blindfolding, walking backwards, on ice that’s paper-thin. Nevermind where they’re going, they can’t even see where they’ve been. Some of the youth of today are lost, and in fact, not trying, to be found. Determined on a day and night journey, for the pursuit, to be placed, in the ground. You can talk to them all day, but it seems like they just don’t listen. I don’t think they’re not paying attention, I think there’s something in their mind that’s missin. Some say, it must have been the parents, that provided a lifestyle so dense. But I say that’s still no excuse, for not using the gift of common sense!

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    afresh30 commented on Dark Path

    09-12-2010

    Its so sad about our young people today, just don't stop talking, also common sense isn't common, its a gift and a lot of people don't have it or don't hone it.

    FLAWLES

    09/16/2010

    True, alot of people don't use it; but everyone has it. When it comes to some of our youth, they have this feeling of "I can't be faded" which is one way road along a "Dark Path". Thanx for your input.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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