Darkest Hour

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    Darkest Hour
    DARKEST HOUR

    I am just hanging onn
    Darkest hour is just before the dawn

    I want to see the first ray of light
    Striking my face hard
    Making my soul unscarred

    Bringing me back to life again
    Just not letting it slain

    I am just hanging onn
    Darkest hour is just before the dawn

    I am just waiting
    Waiting for the dawn
    For the first ray even if its fawn









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    drewking commented on Darkest Hour

    01-23-2009

    i like what the poem is saying.. i think it's a good piece of work...
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    ivecute77 commented on Darkest Hour

    12-03-2008

    i'm not goin to rate this poem simply because i don't much like it. and if i rate it low other readers wont be able to rate it what they think it is. so i am spearing you the low vote.
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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