Darkest Knight

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    • Anata wa Naraku no hana ja nai ~ You are not a flower of Hell

    Darkest Knight
    Dark knight with hand outstretched
    Beckoning me forward
    Surely you jest
    For how could one so magnificent as you stand to glance at me
    Let alone ask for a  dance
    Darkest knight with eyes so blue
    Swirl me around the ballroom
    Enchant me further as I am lost in your depths
    Yes the words you speak enrapture me so
    It is with out a doubt you can hear my heart beat in my chest
    Gentle knight with no ill intent
    I am but a simple girl
    Not worthy of one such as you
    Yet if what you say is true, that in fact I was made just for you
    I will stand by your side to aide you the best that I know
    My knight
    My darling
    I am yours to hold






     

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    kmooney commented on Darkest Knight

    12-05-2010

    Nice dedication to your Dark Knight. I can certainly feel your emotions. I'm sure your Knight is charmed by your heart felt expression of love. Thanks so much for sharing....Kevin
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    MindNumbing commented on Darkest Knight

    11-24-2010

    Isn't it a beautiful feeling, when you find that one person who has the ability to enchant you? I think we all feel a little unworthy when we're lucky enough to find our 'knight', but it's important to remember that he thinks you're quite worthy or he wouldn't waste his time :) This is beautifully written, Mayuna. Well done, my friend!
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    kdarcy commented on Darkest Knight

    11-21-2010

    I like it, we get whats meant for us, not always what we would chose, the Knight only follows after we can see clearly the Light of Day, be well my new friend, looking forward to more from you k
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    GUSTY commented on Darkest Knight

    11-21-2010

    BEAUTIFUL WORK, DEAR MAYUNA! I LOVE IT COS IT REALLY MEANS NO MATTER WHO WE ARE ITS POSSIBLE TO FALL IN LOVE WITH ANYONE: YES 'A KNIGHT CAN BE A DARLING'. BRAVO!!!
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