darkness in the heart

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    darkness in the heart

    she's afraid of the pain, yet she watches it come,
    she's hurting deep down, and is feeling quite numb,
    she knows that it's all, coming to a terrible end,
    she's hurting deep down, but gets up to defend,
    she needs to win this battle, but he spears her lonely heart,
    she dies so that he can live, even if they'll forever be apart.

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    Lucho commented on darkness in the heart

    07-28-2009

    Very nice. To be honest...you are writing on such a high level. You have really shown how one person always gets hurt much more than the other during a break up. I wish I had your skills at your age. The ending is the best part. Keep up the great work

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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