Darkness of Life

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Darkness of Life

A dark future
An real bad past
No one lelf to trust
'cause everyone acts  like
like your friend but thier  not
 You are someone who
who loves someone
the guy you do
do anything for him
but he's just like the
the other so called friend
 he makes you feel like
like you're in heaven 
but he's just playing with you
he's just tring to get
something from you
 you feel like killing
killing yourself
'cause you what him
him to love you
he say that he like you
but he's just telling you
you a LIE
 you cry night after night
'cause of him
sometimes you feel like
like you are not here
you're just a ghost
the one that gets fucked with
 well this might be life
for some people
but it suck when
it's ME
that my fucking life

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dahlusion commented on Darkness of Life

08-20-2010

"sometimes you feel like like you are not here you're just a ghost"—nice phrasing here. bravo! peace and light, dah

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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