Dawn's Coming!

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Well ... Now that we're awake :) . . .

Dawn's Coming!

I woke up this morning -
With you by my side.
The heat of your body,
Pressing up against mine.
My passion arose -
Over-boiling inside.
Overwhelming need,
To be satisfied!
~xxx~
Love in the Morning - Love in the Night!
Dawn's Coming!
Love in the Dark - Love in the Light!
Dawn's Coming!
Love in the Raw - Love in the Sack!
Love under the Gun - Love under Attack!!
Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Baby! - Keep your motor running!!
Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Dawn's Coming!!
~xxx~
I woke up this morning -
My arms around you.
Knew what you wanted,
Hell Ya! I wanted it too!
I held you closer -
As the tension grew.
Hands began to wander -
Hips began to groove!
~xxx~
Love in the Morning - Love in the Night!
Dawn's Coming!
Love in the Dark - Love in the Light!
Dawn's Coming!
Love in the Raw - Love in the Sack!
Love under the Gun - Love under Attack!!
Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Baby! - Keep your motor running!!
Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Dawn's Coming!!
~xxx~
I woke up this morning -
A smile on my face.
Clothes and sheets,
Thrown all over the place.
Said "We better get going -
We're running late.
So come on Baby,
There's no time to waste!"
~xxx~
'Cause - Dawn's Coming!
Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Baby! - Keep your motor running!!
Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
Oh! Dawn's Coming!!
~xxx~
Love in the Morning - Dawn's Coming!!
Love in the Night - Dawn's Coming!!
Love in the Raw - Dawn's Coming!!
Love at first Bite - Dawn's Coming!!
Oh Baby! - Dawn's Coming!!
~xxx~

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JadedJezzabel commented on Dawn's Coming!

08-16-2010

would love to hear this with music..........love the lyric. truned me on a little......ok a lot

knight4696

08/16/2010

lol! :) Thanks JJ - There is no better way to wake up that I know of! :) Thanks again! Ken

Teardrops commented on Dawn's Coming!

03-12-2010

Kne i see I have over looked a true poet , songwritter and teller of stories in you . I wont make that mistake again i will read each and every thing you write its wonderful and clever and creative thanks Maire

knight4696

03/12/2010

Thank you MArie - your comments are so humbling. This is my favorite erotic song. Thanks again for oyur wonderful comments! :) Ken

am2anangel commented on Dawn's Coming!

02-06-2010

sounds fun. again a tune in my head. great job.as always enjoy your work.

knight4696

02/06/2010

Thanks angel ;) It definately is fun! Nothing like a little lovin to start the day! :) Thanks again! Ken

danmartyjake1 commented on Dawn's Coming!

12-28-2009

Great Song! I hear the melody as I read it. Beautiful sounds as it is read aloud. 10!

knight4696

12/28/2009

Thx Marion! I appreciate it - it's one of my personal faves and I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks again! ...Ken

Grito commented on Dawn's Coming!

12-28-2009

How wonderful and airy life and love can be, EXCELLENT IN Dawn!!!

knight4696

12/28/2009

Thanks!!! This is my personal faves of my erotic writes. I'm glad to see you enjoyed it! :) Thanks again! Ken

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