Day and Night

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    Day and Night

    Day and night I think of you,
    in this life its all I do.
    Day and night I’m a notebook poet,
    I really love you and this is how I show it.

    Day and night I don’t know what to do,
    I wanna end this pain between me and you.
    Day and night we were on the phone,
    but as of now our relationship is blown!

    Day and night baby I apologize
    I mean it I promise, just look in my eyes.
    Day and night I feel your tears,
    It’s like I’ve been loving you for several years.

    Really I just want for us to be all rite,
    I love you, I love you, day and night.

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    Chaos128 commented on Day and Night

    12-09-2010

    Reuinite, whatever it takes, And don't repeat your past mistakes : )
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    ahardwalk commented on Day and Night

    12-06-2010

    a beautiful write and we can all relate to this poem once were in a relationship not wanting to let it go
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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