DEAD EYES

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  • phoenix29
  • been a member since 2008, under PHOENIX9 &29. PHOENIX is my writing name,.have over 150 poems here, trying to help the site if i can to be a great site for creative poets everywhere, read and help and comment those who need it.. anyone want to do challenges? let me know.

DEAD EYES

You look deep with clear eyes, focused,
Staring striaght ahead, seeing beyond everyone else,
Seeing beyond life, beyond stars, beyond the unknown,
Looking farther than you thought possible, Possibilities,
You dont blink fearing you may miss something, Extraordinary,
Your sights are true, your aim flawless,
Holding your breath seems like an eternity,
Laying on your stomach in a flied or on a beach,
On a mountain top, your everywhere at once,
From the smallest of craters on the moon,
To the grandest of canyons hiding behind a waterfall,
Your eyes pierce the day as well as the night,
From steel gray to sky blue back to emerald green,
And every hue in between,
Its that bit of starlight that shines in the corner of your eyes,
That says it all, ice cold,
All thats left to do in your life now,
Is to pull the trigger......

PHOENIX          8/29/19

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

phoenix29’s Poems (28)

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PERFECT PITCH 0
NIGHTMARE 2
NEVER ENOUGH 2
THE GREATEST POEM EVER WRITTEN 1
ITS NOT ME 1
INTENSITY 0
INSIGNIFCANT 0
IM A COSMIC JOKE 1
I AM MADE OF LIGHT 0
HARSH WORLD 0
ETERNAL SAND 0
DEVOURED 0
DEATH BY LIFE 0
DEAD 0
CHARRED REMAINS 0
BEYONDE REASON 0
AYERS ROCK 0
ALL THAT I HAVE LOST 0
BLOOD AND CHAMPAGNE 0
HERE COMES THE CARNIVORES 0
ALL IN A SECOND 0
THE LAST CARNIVAL 0
is there a contest? not since 2010 0
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DEAD EYES 0
EVERY 0
FLY 1
SAYINGS 0