Dead once more

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Dead once more

My soul is empty, my heart is frail

and it's all because of you.

My life is flashing, I'm on this rail.

You see what I'm about to do.

 

Because of you, I'll die again;

Not that you would care.

I never knew love was a sin.

But I suppose life isn't fair.

 

So here I am about to jump,

I hope this gets you off.

With that I say “Farewell dump.”

Only to hear you cough.

 

I take the plunge, and now I'm cold

and yet you slam the door.

As I die, you release your hold.

And then you hit the floor.

 

Your soul is dark, your heart is empty.

This much you can tell.

But look at me, I'm finally free.

So I hope you enjoy your hell.

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ravensaflight commented on Dead once more

10-02-2009

good job...you did a good job painting a picture with words...

Cakeboy9 commented on Dead once more

10-02-2009

This one is soo impressive i feel i am reading my life's story.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Venom637’s Poems (35)

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Curse from God 0
Tainted 2
Gothic Christmas 1
Shattered Souls 1
Blank 2
I am darkness 0
I could only try 1
Broken 2
Cloak 0
This is it 3
My prayer 4
Escape 2
Alone 2
Tainted 2
Succubus 0
Reflection 3
Twisted 1
Stripped Away 3
Dead Man's dance 3
Darkness Rang 1
One Thorn 2
Life 1
Insane 0
FairyTale 0
Lost 1
Mislead 0
Dead 1
Dead once more 2
The roses were red 2
For the life we live 0
The Last Rose 2
Against my will 2
The Color Red 3
Sea of Lies 5
Ten Black Roses 9