Deadbeat Dad of Mine


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He missed out on me.... His loss..

Deadbeat Dad of Mine

This is for that Deadbeat Dad of mine
The one that never took the time
To get to know his own daughter
What a coward!!!!!
However, He is the one that missed out
I always wanted to say "Freak YOU!!!"
You didn't care about me
All you cared about is you
I hate you!!!!!
Now that is out of my system
Another thing I want to say is "I forgive you"
You left me and never turned back
I think your whack
I don't know what kind of person you are
But not a good one obviously
You left your kid behind, you see
You left a daughter to grow up with out a father
You didn't even bother
To call or nothing at all
I just want to say
It's all your fault
And now I'm like a vault
The riches are inside
and no way in
If you were around you might of had the key
But,Since you choose to flee
you will not enjoy the fruits from my tree
Any one can be a sperm donor
But it takes a real man to be a father..

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

jadedoll’s Poems (24)

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My Brain 2
The Quest 2
From the heart 2
Another day 3
How it started 2
What we do unto others 1
"Gods place is the world but the world is not God's place" 2
I forgive you 1
How deep is your love? 1
A Love lost 1
I'll Always Love You 1
Goodbye my love 1
Working Mother 1
Life is Fragile Handle with Prayer 1
My Ball Point Pen 1
Gunshots 2
The ONE 0
*My Friend* 0
Deadbeat Dad of Mine 0
The covenant 0
The One Who Wakes the Sun 1
Peace like a river 1
More than a savoir 1
Don't eat the forbidden fruit! 2