*DEAL*

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    • LeeLee420xx
    • I am strong Because I have been Weak I Am Beautiful Because I Know My Flaws,I Am Afraid because I have Been Fearless, I Can be a Fool because I Know The Meaning Of Being Wise. I am me and I am awsome!

    *DEAL*

    Is it ever wrong ? Does it ever speak ? If it is not ragging on me ?

    Clouded thoughts lay ahead . So wishing I could call this dead .

    But I see it now , it never will be , This will live on eternally .

    In the heart of you my friend , Where the feelings will not mend .

    Let it go , give it up , Stop putting up the fuss .

    It hurts me , but I heel , You just seem like you can't deal .

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    walter commented on *DEAL*

    03-10-2009

    I read this and a few other poems. very powerful! Excellent writing. thanks for the add! I will be posting some of my own in the next few days. Please feel free to share your thoughts as well. Walter

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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