Dear love.

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    Love. love. love. Such a confusing thing.

    Dear love.

     Dear love.

    Dear love, you’ve seem to lost me this time
    Confusing me with your sudden approach
     You’ve left me on my bed crying
    I was lost in your desire
    My heart burning like fire
    You left me with misery
    Sad, cold, emptiness
    You smiled upon my soul
    You told me where to go
    You kissed my cheek
    Whenever I was weak
    You held me tightly
    All through the darkness of the night
    When you ended
    I was forever lost in you
    Apart of me left
    And I still hold you forever in my mind
     
    Sincerely, Your lover.

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    ImStillHere commented on Dear love.

    09-09-2010

    you have some great potential for your age. :) keep going and growing... poems are made for expressions. :) lovely poem.
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    SilentMelody

    09/11/2010

    Thank you so much

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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