Dear Mommy

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  • ladydraeko
  • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

Poem Commentary

I wrote this at my mother's house in FL when I got to meet her, its mushy, sappy and full of love, but it's what I wanted her to know.....

Dear Mommy

Dear Mommy

Every day that passed by
My thoughts always turned to you
Through sunshine and darkness
I kept believing my dream would come true

We parted ways when I was young
Missing holidays, events and birthdays
But deep inside of my beating heart
I knew one day you'd be here to stay

One phone call made, many questions asked
"Are you my mom?" was said
And finally light shined all around
Angels danced around my head

For many years there was a hole
That only you could fill
Inside me now there's love and hope
And a joy my heart now spills

Thank you mom for giving me life
And making my dreams come true
The day I found you I became complete
No longer will I ever be blue

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NacolleMarie commented on Dear Mommy

06-17-2010

okay this one made me cry because i wish i got the chance to meet my real father,.sadly i spent my life trying to find him and then found out he passed wh en i was in highschool....i can feel this one very much

justme1970 commented on Dear Mommy

06-17-2009

Very touching poem...... Real life put into words. Please keep writing, you have a special gift. One I enjoy reading... thanks

LesHale commented on Dear Mommy

06-15-2009

Awesome Poem. The feelings in this poem are so fufilling and heart warming. you did a great job writting this poem. Keep up the great work.

mpjtforever commented on Dear Mommy

06-11-2009

I CAN REALLY RELATE. I WAS ADOPTED WHEN I WAS THREE. STRIPPED FROM MY FAMILY AND 8 BROTHERS AND SISTERS. II JUST FOUND MY MOM 11 YEARS AGO. GREAT WRITING. IT TOUCHED MY HEART. YOUR FRIEND JODI

blanket commented on Dear Mommy

06-10-2009

very emotional...I know very well about regret but you can't let it eat you up, live for today! If you haven't seen the movie UP you need to! It is wonderful and inspirational! wonderful!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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