Dear Mommy

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    • ladydraeko
    • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

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    I wrote this at my mother's house in FL when I got to meet her, its mushy, sappy and full of love, but it's what I wanted her to know.....

    Dear Mommy

     Dear Mommy

    Every day that passed by
    My thoughts always turned to you
    Through sunshine and darkness
    I kept believing my dream would come true

    We parted ways when I was young
    Missing holidays, events and birthdays
    But deep inside of my beating heart
    I knew one day you'd be here to stay

    One phone call made, many questions asked
    "Are you my mom?" was said
    And finally light shined all around
    Angels danced around my head

    For many years there was a hole
    That only you could fill
    Inside me now there's love and hope
    And a joy my heart now spills

    Thank you mom for giving me life
    And making my dreams come true
    The day I found you I became complete
    No longer will I ever be blue

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    NacolleMarie commented on Dear Mommy

    06-17-2010

    okay this one made me cry because i wish i got the chance to meet my real father,.sadly i spent my life trying to find him and then found out he passed wh en i was in highschool....i can feel this one very much
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    justme1970 commented on Dear Mommy

    06-17-2009

    Very touching poem...... Real life put into words. Please keep writing, you have a special gift. One I enjoy reading... thanks
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    LesHale commented on Dear Mommy

    06-15-2009

    Awesome Poem. The feelings in this poem are so fufilling and heart warming. you did a great job writting this poem. Keep up the great work.
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    mpjtforever commented on Dear Mommy

    06-11-2009

    I CAN REALLY RELATE. I WAS ADOPTED WHEN I WAS THREE. STRIPPED FROM MY FAMILY AND 8 BROTHERS AND SISTERS. II JUST FOUND MY MOM 11 YEARS AGO. GREAT WRITING. IT TOUCHED MY HEART. YOUR FRIEND JODI
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    blanket commented on Dear Mommy

    06-10-2009

    very emotional...I know very well about regret but you can't let it eat you up, live for today! If you haven't seen the movie UP you need to! It is wonderful and inspirational! wonderful!
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