Death and Fate

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    Death and Fate

    He is the bringer
    of mass destruction;
    play his game-
    play it well.
    There is no room
    for second chances-
    win or loose
    and close the deal.
    Bluff and find
    his hand is better;
    bet and all to soon you find;
    death does not
    rely on chance,
    when it comes
    to frame of mind.
    Victory
    taste all the sweeter,
    when prelude
    to bitter guile.
    You are weak,
    he's always stronger-
    do not fight,
    give up your life.
    Fate steps forth,
    it's time to forfeit;
    cash your chips
    reserve your place;
    After all,
    life is but a passage-
    a single story,
    played out on a page.
    A page of life
    that has been written
    and it is
    time
           to
             close
                     the
                         book..

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    Mareann commented on Death and Fate

    10-23-2009

    Right on! ... you gave strong testimony on this. Great Job! powerful, meaningful words, loved it. thanks for posting. Mareann
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    bforibus commented on Death and Fate

    10-13-2009

    very gloom. so without hope this character is. its acceptance of death makes this character the most dangerous of all emotions.
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    mamasan commented on Death and Fate

    10-12-2009

    Yes, indeed the page of violence and injustice and destruction has been written; seemingly, over and over again thru the ages. Indeed I feel the sordid mess history is playing out for us to witness; is the same old story of man seemingly bent on a suicide bent. And, I wonder, if that is why man is looking to enter a new exploration outside of t he realm of earth and in to the moon. May it never happen; or I am sure the devastation they have wrought here will follow them there. Just recently when they bumped purposely in to the moon to look for water; I seen in my mind's eye....the picture of that great American Indian with tears running down the worn furrows of his face. Aye.......aye.......
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    rougepriest commented on Death and Fate

    09-28-2009

    interesting poem the way you use death and gambling to make the point and end with a book, cool the way you did that
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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