Death From My Fiddle

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Death From My Fiddle

Strike up a match!
but stand back,
When I play my fiddle,
Your breath I will take away
Strike up my fiddle,
watching the others dance,
When I play my fiddle,
listen to my song
Strike across the strings,
listen to the loud hiss,
When I play my fiddle,
it penetrates the ear
Strike up the band,
do what I say,
When I play my fiddle,
It will scare you half to death
I will strike you,
my fiddle your death I will bring,
When I play my fiddle,
You didn't expect this

Your phone is ringing
Death is calling
Answer it!

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DeepEclipse commented on Death From My Fiddle

11-20-2009

Not my kind of instrament, but the way you wrote it made it read fast. Like you were playing fast. Swiftly movign through chords and strings. Nice. Fast reading gave it an energeticnes.

dumplin commented on Death From My Fiddle

11-20-2009

Wow, bold! Unrhyming, but kinda cool, nonetheless.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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