Death in Love


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It's time for a fresh start.

Death in Love

In the end,
we must let our beloved go
We must set them free
to fulfill their dreams

Let fate take its course
we must'n hold them back
even as much as we want to,
Love is strong
though not as strong as two different destines

Hearts will be broken
Love will be gone
Bonds will be severed
Sadness will consume them
Though it is for the best
All good things must come to an end

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kdarcy commented on Death in Love


Short and full of the realities of life. Kepp at it, it will come and stay one day, be well

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

lupainlove’s Poems (12)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Death in Love 1
The Rush of Lust 1
Broken 0
To Thee 1
Feed 2
Her 2
My Bond 2
Happy Anniversary 1
My Hunger 1
A Chance 0
Realize 1
My Love 2