Death Note

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Death Note

I'm told to believe in the impossible.
I'm told to pray for myself.
I'm told to hear people weep.

I'm forced to stare at myself in
a mirror and call it hate.

I feel nothing but hatred for this soul that I possess.

I hear nothing but lies
whispered inside my head.

I see nothing but death; my death.

Excrushiating pain trickles through my body.

It seems to have staggered into the core of my chest.

I die slowly.
Until I can no longer breath in my existence.

As I recognize the face that
stabbed me in the chest.

I fall down to my knees and pray for mercy.

As my prayers are ignored.

I close my eyes.

So does the face in front of me.

....I'm dead.

Because no one has mercy on a suicidal soul.

By the way, that face was me.

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MarionYost commented on Death Note

06-25-2010

Dunno about anyone else but I already knew that 'that face was me."... Maybe because I've been there a time or two... NICE write. I love the way this is constructed. All the best -Marion-

Rhymer commented on Death Note

02-10-2010

I love the dark writes, I hate mirrors they show who we really are all to often. I wrote a poem called reflections you might enjoy another 10 from me.

jesusfreake commented on Death Note

02-08-2010

yea this is dark....this is something thats real and pure and that a lot of people are feeling...its real familiar as well...when u look in the mirror and see your very definition of "HATE"...u hate the reflection in the mirror...oh yeah, I've been there and its the worse place to be..great write...u wanna talk about it? I'm always here...I'll listen to anything u have to say..

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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