Death's Kiss

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    Death's Kiss

    A feeling of ruin and desolation

    Washed over me, drowning me

    As the inhospitable sky let loose its fury

     

    Arcane power permeated throughout

    Goosebumps danced along my flesh

    As bloody rain poured down

     

    Dreams shattered, Love vanished

    And the gates to Hell opened for me

    As I surrendered my heart

     

    A swirling blue mist poured forth

    From the shadowy void

    As the destruction ensued

     

    Flames licked my face

    And thin caliginous wisps of smoke

    Gripped my lungs like miniature ghosts

     

    Winds began stirring the embers

    Into a wickedly wild dance

    As Death’s obsidian wings fluttered before me

     

    The figure before me advanced

    Emanating loss and rage so strongly

    That I pleaded for a quick demise

     

    His tongue stained my thoughts

    Flowing like a river stained red

    With words both tender and vile

     

    His hollow eyes bore through me

    Bleeding with crimson lust

    And I bathed in the downfall

     

    Here in the darkness

    He whispered his final plea

     

    “Your hand in mine”

    “Your soul but for a kiss”

     

    And I, alone and unloved

    Accepted Death’s kiss.



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    Crush commented on Death's Kiss

    07-06-2009

    moved, i am always moved by your work. i feel like i am there with you and that means much to me. thank you. i don't know if this is appropriate but, i would like to recommend Passiondance as someone you should read if you haven't. this poet is very special, as you are and i think you would feel what i do if you checked her out. need i say, i give you another 10.
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    wickedfrost commented on Death's Kiss

    06-29-2009

    I am dying of ovarian cancer and I have been waiting to accept death's kiss....and now that I feel I'm not alone..I can do it with open eyes, heart and soul. Thank you for your amazing words.
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Death's Kiss

    06-11-2009

    Yet again i read your words and you tear out my heart and Squezze out whats left of my blood in front of me. I know that i have read this poem before but i just read it again for the hell of it and the impact of your words made me shutter in my own selfish hole that i call a life... Yet again you have out done yourself... Im looking forward to reading your next masterpeice. Your Freind and fellow poet Grim
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    bandit1192 commented on Death's Kiss

    06-11-2009

    I missed your dark and elegant touch. No one on this site or any other can dream of writing with the creativity you posses. Still a fan. TS
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    WordSlinger commented on Death's Kiss

    06-10-2009

    whhoo, I hear ya I agree with Dahlusion, His tongue stained my thoughts, lol, like a puppy dog, death loves us, lol, This is so awesome,Beautiful death be proud of this one.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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