DEEP DARK

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    DEEP DARK

    There's a darkness inside me,
    Sitting in the entrails of my heart,
    Breathing in the stench of my misdeeds,
    Surfeits on my self conceit,
    Making me diffident,lessening fortitude in me!!!

    This darkness grows like a parasitic cascuta,
    Its Tacky arms sliding all over my soul,
    Poisoning all the virtuousness in it,
    Trying to dissuade me beleiving in god,
    Trying to ally me to hell Inch by Inch in all strata!!!

    This darkness has many relatives which are the seven deadly sins,
    It only has canine teeth in its jaw,
    so its tearing my soul apart day by day,
    My soul trying to repudiate this usurpation over it,
    Its lying in RIGOR-MORTIS yet dont want that darkness wins!!

    Remembering the image of itself before darkness's arrival,
    My soul regathers all that is left in it for fighting back,
    Suddenly all Morals and Good deeds reincarnate,
    Dressed like a belligerent they all stand against darkness's army,
    & whatever be the result of this war,This revolt Is essential for Survival!!!

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    WordSlinger commented on DEEP DARK

    07-31-2009

    hey i like your bio, good stuff, welcome to OP....

    lips_unlocked

    08/05/2009

    thanx man!!

    WordSlinger commented on DEEP DARK

    07-31-2009

    Revolt, revolt, I admire this, This is one good poem.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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