deep-diving

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    deep-diving

    I did not want to fall away
    not really
    I believe there are no accidents
    so strongly
    actions speak louder than words
    you have to see them
    and to say I run at the first sign of trouble
    not freely
    I wanted to tie a knot
    to end my years of searching
    but my choices were not so good
    and I'm still hurting
    what scares me the most
    is not finding the right one
    but settling for something less
    is undeserving
    dodging disappointments
    not intentionally
    coming off insensitive
    is a self-made mask
    like a cover to a book
    or water in a flask
    but blindness to some seekers
    it's paralyzing
    pushing and pulling
    only nuetralizes
    to say I get what I ask for
    it's very rare
    but to find a love worth waiting for
    it's still out there
    I'm deep-diving
    and just a shore away

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    HarverTomsson commented on deep-diving

    07-20-2009

    Once again, your writing has mesmerized me.I was caught to the very end.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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