"DEEP IN SHADE"

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    "DEEP IN SHADE"

     

     

    Once in this gloomy night,

    A voice echoed from afar.

    As one waddled and wallowed in this land;

    No one knows what awaits them in the midland.

     

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    As one trembles to cross this navigable river;

    He always tried not to fall.

    This one hopeful wayfarer,

    Never gives up to reach his goal.

     

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    One maybe  a  warmonger,

    But never hesitates to be at peace with a stranger,

    One maybe a wanton person,

    But never forgets to wake up for a call.

     

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    There maybe a time that a vengeance will splurge,

    This maybe because of a voracious nature;

    But when one will triumphantly crosses this viaduct,

    One will glow in the dark.

     

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    ***0IIIXIIM0X***

     

    -jammaekas-

     

     

     

     

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    soulwriter commented on "DEEP IN SHADE"

    04-30-2010

    Well placed words of thoughts and emotions, commanding the art of wrapping the text to navigate the circumstance!

    jammaekas

    05/03/2010

    soulwriter:) thanks:)

    jyothi commented on "DEEP IN SHADE"

    04-04-2010

    Good trying for poet.you'll become ==================a poet.

    nhorlandi commented on "DEEP IN SHADE"

    03-28-2010

    Nicely thought verses, there are irregular rhymes though. Anyway no matter how difficult the road is if one has a determination to cross it there's no reason he'll be on top of it. That's my understanding, Jam. Thanks

    jammaekas

    03/29/2010

    the comment you wrote is exactly what i mean..thank you Nhorlandi...:)

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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