Deep Reflection

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    Deep Reflection

    Lost in deep reflection of the mirror in the mind.

    Constant re-inspection seek the lost that I might find.

    Thoughts appear then fade away like still shots on a screen.

    Bombarded conscience everyday like living a bad dream.

     

    Unable to turn off the stream of visions that appear.

    Sometimes they make me want to scream until they disappear.

    And other times they bring a smile when the memories filled with joy.

    Like those brief moments as a child playing games with favorite toys.

     

    But when your life is full of pain that you feel no one understands.

    And you feel the need to stop a train by holding out your hand.

    Then a voice says “ it’s okay forget about that plan”.

    Everything will be right one day and then proudly you can stand.

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    ListninEar commented on Deep Reflection

    11-16-2009

    I loved the start of this one. It seemed to end prematurely to me. It doesn't feel like that last stanza should really be the end. It feels like it needs more

    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    It probably does need more. I just don't know if the average person could stomach the details involved with it's beginnig.

    DeepEclipse commented on Deep Reflection

    09-17-2009

    Love the rhyming. Two in one line. Skilled indeed. Perhaps the path to master outside is through within...? I feel this struggle......

    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    Thank you again, I truely have written for my own well being. And a friend convinced me to share my writings with others.

    Kyranna commented on Deep Reflection

    09-14-2009

    amazing poem! i keep giving all your poems a 10. =D i love em'.

    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    Kyranna ... thank you again girl. Just be yourself and don't worry what others think.

    Artie commented on Deep Reflection

    07-26-2009

    Ah yes the voice of reason. Too bad all don't hear it. 10 from me.

    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    thanks Artie. I do try to find the possessive out of all the negatives of life.

    passionsdance commented on Deep Reflection

    07-03-2009

    good flow . I know this feeling all too well . when the eflection looks back at you and in it you can se the rancor you have for life and all its illusions a despair ... good job

    RonicaLeigh

    11/16/2009

    I'm pleased that someone can truely understand what i was trying to say here . Thank you .

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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