delusion

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    delusion

    there is a brotherhood of man---somewhere beyond a shining sea---where thoughts are pure---and souls can be seen--when i travel to that land--i wonder if i'll be--the same proud man--with the seed of discord i must bring.

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    ginga commented on delusion

    06-21-2009

    Very moving and somehow in its own subtle way disturbing. I like how the last line twists and shows the delusion. ginga

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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