desire to love

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    • dirtysouth
    • is enjoying life and gets his insperation from his kids and his loving wife

    desire to love
    the desire to love is inoccent and sweet
    so hard until uyou first meet the love
    and desire you fill inside will take
    you on your most passionate ride
    our love is strong so strong that u
    know that we belong together and forever
    always and beyond if you have the desire
    to love you have the desire to keep on
    goin and doing what you know is right
    so when u fight make sure your love is strong
    and tight and never forget to put up a
    fight because when ur desire for your
    love desipears youll never have the love
    that you share
    dedicated to my loving wife
    leena christine collins

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    FoF commented on desire to love

    03-13-2009

    I leave this as a general comment for all your work. I applaud that a young man can feel free to write his heart's feelings down, about his wife. But if you truly want to be a better writer - attention has to be paid to details. Spelling, grammer, and getting a feel for language having a rhythym to it. Keep working at it.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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