Desolation Of The Damned


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Emerging from the Fire's of Hell ...

Desolation Of The Damned

As the thunder rolls thru the desolate land -
And the skies begin to turn black.
The Reaper seizes the weakened man,
While the land is under attack!
With howling winds, the Damnation begins -
And it's never turning back.
With fire in his eyes, the Reaper flies,
As he completes his evil task!

Emerging from the Fire's of Hell -
The Reaper casts his demonic spell.
Sinners dropping upon his command,
This is the Desolation of the Damned!

Lucifer awaits by the fiery gates -
Tallying sinners, one by one.
Standing in line as they await,
The millions more to come!
Six years have passed, the Damnation fast -
With one more year to go.
Evil seeks the souls it keeps,
When your time comes you'll know!

Emerging from the Fire's of Hell -
The Reaper casts his demonic spell.
Sinners dropping upon his command,
This is the Desolation of the Damned!

The sexual heights - The lust filled nights -
The sinful blackened lies.
The Reaper's laughing with delight,
As Damnation takes it's stride!
It is the seventh year, Sinners fear - 
For your time is soon to come.
For the Desolation of the Damned is here,
And you are the chosen ones!

Emerging from the Fire's of Hell -
The Reaper casts his demonic spell.
Sinners dropping upon his command,
This is the Desolation of the Damned!


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bubba commented on Desolation Of The Damned


Nice image you paint it really brings the story to life kinda makes me not want to go outside haha but anyway man a real great piece bravo 10 Hero Cookies from me.



Thank you Dan! :) Sorry for the delay in response, I've been extremely busy. and havem't been on-line much. I appreciate your awesome comments my friend! :) Ken

mustascheman commented on Desolation Of The Damned


It's K K K K Ken coming to k k k kill me!!! 10 points if you can name the movie that quote is from! Awesome piece dude! If I didn't know any better I'd say I wrote this!!!LOL A visual feast for the darkened soul. :)



Thanks Stash! :) Believe it or not I'm not much of a movie I don't have a clue... Assuming it's a horror your talking about ..I'll take a stab at it .. The Shining? Anyway ... Thanks for the read and comments Pal! :) Ken



Nope ..close..A Fish Called Wanda..with Jamie Lee Curtis, John Cleese, and a few other actors, whose names escape me!

Teardrops commented on Desolation Of The Damned


You go knight how wonderful a poem about the collector of souls satins right hand man . Well he better have a really big gun when he comes my way remember we in the west carry big guns lol great poem my friend great read Marie



Lol! Thanks Marie :) I wrote this song back in the hey-days of heavy metal - I was a big fan of the darker side - loved Black Sabbath, Iron Maiden and such .. my favorite was "DIO" Ronnie was such an influence in my writings - he was dark and sinister and Medieval. :) just my style! lol :) Thanks again my friend! Ken

am2anangel commented on Desolation Of The Damned


another dark read very well written and visual. great job.



Thanks Angel! :) These lyrics are written in "Dio"esque style. I'm happy you enjoy my dark lyrics as well! Thanks again, Ken

Grito commented on Desolation Of The Damned


Damn Ken, I see you are an artistic novelist of the first order at heart!!!



Thanks Grito - You humble me so with your comments. I appreciate your sentiments very much. Thanks friend! :) .. Ken

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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