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    The motions is what you go through when you’re emotionless in love
    Many postpone this devotion when they’re emotionless
    Romance is just lustful when your emotionless in love
    Commit only the physical when your emotions are full of nothing
    Abandon the spiritual tempted cause of the sensual sensations
    Part of the raging flesh ritual.
    Love is constant and we deal with only the physical portion
    As a man I sip from her potion yearning for her poison
    Keeping my emotions on the sideline
    Never to enter the game of love
    Heart deprived from the quote unquote valentine that her hear desires
    That inner eternal burning fire
    Emotions like a barbwire fence protection one innocense

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    Lyfe commented on DETACHED

    04-17-2009

    As well as your writing, the Artwork is MYthing also

    Mariam66 commented on DETACHED

    04-15-2009

    Beautiful! "Love is constant and we deal with only the physical portion"... soo true! there is so much more...

    TeenaMontana commented on DETACHED

    03-29-2009

    wow,I have read a lot of your work and it is like I am reading from a different person EVERYTIME.U R SO TALENTED!10

    litldeer commented on DETACHED

    03-18-2009

    Another masterpiece. I'm really liking your work. I love all the poems you wrote. You are very talented. Write on!

    Spineless commented on DETACHED

    03-17-2009

    well said, very well said. It's true we play the game of love often times emotionless. not many see that for what it is. Nice job.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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