Did it Matter

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    • ListninEar
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    another one on one lost love....

    Did it Matter

     It was mystical, mysterious
    could it really ever have been?
    to look into your eyes
    and feel our souls akin

    Was it more than just a moment
    while it seemed eternity
    if time had stopped upon us
    when we were all we were meant to be

    I felt complete and happy
    how did it unravel
    all I head is pain now
    how long here must I travel

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    FranzJ commented on Did it Matter

    06-20-2010

    love and loosing love are the subjects of some great poems - sorry that you lost love, but please keep writing and sharing
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    ListninEar

    07/06/2010

    You are so right on that one...love and lost love are the subjects of some of the best! Thanks for reading and thanks for your comments!

    vincenzo commented on Did it Matter

    05-25-2010

    hmmm... smooth flow of words. nice thinking pattern, keep it up.
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    MarionYost commented on Did it Matter

    04-06-2010

    Like the flow of this. Great job once again All the best -Marion-
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    ListninEar

    05/04/2010

    Thanks Marion! I REALLY value your comments. I have read ur poetry and it totally blew my mind. You have such heart and mad talent... I connect with ur work so much and feel such a connection to ur beautiful spirit as it shows through in ur work

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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