Did You Smile?

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This actually happened to me. I remembered waking up happy smiling as if, i was told everything will be alright and just care free. So i wrote a poem instantly. Written Feb 2007

Did You Smile?

I am asleep;
dreaming of elusive worlds.
I sensed emotions I deemed
were real.

I saw a memory that
Gave me warmth.
I awoke, except I was
still smiling.

As I laid there in wonder,
I broke into morning laughter.
t'was a vivid dawn to a simple happiness.

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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