Differences

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    Differences

    It funny how the world works
    How there’s you and there’s me and there’s this place that we’re in
    But there’s no we
    And I’m beginning to think it could never be
    That you and I are trapped forever as separate entities
    Even though this place brought us together
    Through hard work and luck and…fate?
    I’m starting to see that there will never be
    Anything more than a hug, a smile, a somewhat longing stare
    And the knowledge that, if things were different,
    Things might be different.
    It’s a shame how this world works
    How things as inconsequential as mere differences of opinion
    Can make such a difference
    Can alter the course of our days, our weeks
    Our very lives
    They say that opposites attract
    And yet society almost forces you to find someone who’s virtually the same
    The same in all the important ways
    The ways that matter to our parents, and to society
    When did we stop shaping our ideals
    And become shaped by them?
    Why are we too cowardly to defy the world’s preset patterns
    And carve out our own lives?
    Must we forever be content with a hug, a smile, a somewhat longing stare
    And a sad nostalgic idea of what could have been there?
    I’ve been down that road before
    It’s not enough…I need more
    You and I, we’re a beautiful idea
    A dream I’ll remember fondly in the days ahead
    But that now I have to force out of my head
    Don’t worry: you’ll still get a hug and a smile
    But my longing stares now belong to that boy over there…

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    bustaryme commented on Differences

    06-11-2009

    MayaReid- that was a great read. I could envision the situation you descirbed. Like maybe a gathering of somewhat. Maybe even at a picnic or something but I can see the story you wrote. I like to read poems that draw pictures for the reader to enjoy seeing as well as reading the words. Great job!

    hubbleclub commented on Differences

    05-26-2009

    i don't know when this poem was written, but maybe it's not important since words in a poem must stretch across the vast reaches of time and captivate someone a thousand years from now...i hope i'm around to reread it...

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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