Different

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i wrote this when i met a friend of mine who seemed like i could hand with and be noticed

Different

I'm so different
I'm so weird
i don't fit in anywhere
no matter the seen or
mood i always kill
any party because
of being so different
i won't drink a drop of alcohol
i won't blow a single blow off
a ciggeret of pot
i won't wear slutty clothes
though I'm so different
i think i might have
found the one who fits in
still kinda silly
so now maybe i can
find a place to be myself
and not cause such a fuss
maybe i can be different
maybe i can still belong
so i won't feel so alone
in a crowed of friends
maybe i won't have to
be alone when there's
a party going on

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Span commented on Different

09-29-2009

Youth and you, and yet the day shall find, one that will remain true to HIM and HIS thought for you, Endure my friend, yes endure, for one shall meet and come aside you there, endure and you shall see that HE proposed one for thee. Endure sweet one for youth it doth evade, and God you see is the very one to whom you were made, endure my friend, and soon, very soon, one shall come aside, whom indeed will make you happy inside. And when it is done, was this not what you wanted? Endure.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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