Disappearance

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  • Dreams

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    The dream world can often be far more appealing than the waking one...

    Disappearance

     Guided by candle light. 
    This road twists and turns into the night.
    Though I hold you tight, I open my eyes and your not there.
    My heart knows your face.
    Its this memory that I still chase.
    In the morning haze, I open my eyes and your not there.

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    jerseycrtz commented on Disappearance

    08-29-2010

    I really liked this poem. Simplistic and astonishing. Keep it up, and you'll become a wonderful writer.
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    Stryx commented on Disappearance

    08-29-2010

    That is the case with a dream - often, whether asleep or awake.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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