No dream control

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No dream control

I don't breathe at night
where dreams rule I
I wish to lose my sight
For I see through a fools eye

(I can't wait for time
 for time is never mine
 but one thing that I find
 are that some times won't leave my mind)

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dahlusion commented on No dream control

12-02-2009

A simple beauty of poetic foliage with nothing needing to be cut back. Bravo!

Tempestlady commented on No dream control

10-17-2009

REM can really be a drag huh? Nice short one, it's not a haiku? what is the form. Write on...

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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