• Death

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    My idea of a person discovering he is passing over from life to death.


    The walk seemed to go slow
    I did not see a friend or foe
    Only birds and dogs
    And I swear they said hello

    I don't remember leave my home
    All I know is that I am alone
    Looking around my view is obscurded
    And dead ahead is a brillant white glow

    I see people in the light
    Family members and the like
    Joy and happiness is filling my soul
    I now know this is where I belong

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