Disillusion

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    Disillusion

    Where to begin,
    My tale of woe,
    Too much distance,
    I should have known.

    Previous ties unbroken,
    Lead to lies unspoken.

    Too good to be true,
    And you know what they say,
    The heart still hopes and prays.

    No right to question,
    Or right to be mad,
    It was something,
    I never really had.

    So, hear me now,
    My tarnished knight,
    Usually I don't give up,
    Without a fight.

    But in this instance,
    I will gladly bow out,
    kicking and screaming,
    And wanting to shout!

    What a horrible thing,
    For you to do,
    When all I wanted,
    Was to be loved by you.

    But your life is taken,
    And your heart is cold,
    My heart's breaking,
    I should've listened,
    To what I was told.

    Love is blind,
    But never did I think,
    You would be so unkind.

    So skeptical and hard hearted before,
    Probably because I already knew the score.

    Finding happiness,
    Is so easy for some,
    Somehow I always,
    End up with crumbs.


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    thiefinthenight commented on Disillusion

    08-06-2009

    nice stuff reminds of that tv show saving grace and how she copes with world ups and downs and choices abound

    LeLover

    08/27/2009

    That show happens to be one of my favorites-how scary is that?

    gogant commented on Disillusion

    08-02-2009

    Can't be hurt...not me, you ? maybe...a curling smoke ring does not burn, but our loves can. Dust 'm you must cause they can crumble too. thanx 4 a goodly built list of words....

    laydbak1 commented on Disillusion

    07-29-2009

    No kidding LL... For every good intention and dreamy kind of hope we have for being with a good person who's good to and for us, there is always a shattered dream just waiting to happen... Doesn't mean we give up... It just means we need to not be so quick to drop our guards and throw caution to the wind... There are people out there who, plain and simply put, aren't good for us... Good write...

    monkyntz commented on Disillusion

    05-18-2009

    nice one painful but also the freedom of letting go a deffinate 10

    lightcourier commented on Disillusion

    05-01-2009

    Gather the crumbs and get 7 bushels of bread...lol. Nice to read. Thanks.

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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