Do Not Remain…

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  • dahlusion
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Do Not Remain…

Do not remain
down there
so ashamed.

Your sadness
crawls through the universe
affecting the stars.

Whoever you are,
I am curious
to know

your tenderness,
your dreams,
the full spread of your heart.

I have made this poem
out of your soul

which has indicated to me
a tear,
a longing,

an atmosphere of raw pain.

I have made this poem
so that it may
exhaust your shame.



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Tempy commented on Do Not Remain…

04-09-2010

Your sadness crawls through the universe affecting the stars. i absolutly love these lines and the lead up verse

dahlusion

04/09/2010

thank you...

derfiniw23 commented on Do Not Remain…

12-28-2009

Some people love to wallow in self pitty. I knew a guy like that. He married a good friend of mine and her life was a living hell. f.y.i. lol ...Anyway, this is an interesting poem. I can just see some melancholy person reading this and gasping with shock, saying "He is writing to me!!!" Good poem.

jferclark commented on Do Not Remain…

09-14-2009

Thank you... thank you... thank you. I feel as if this were written just for me, as I am sure many others share that same feeling. You have an amazing gift. -- JEN

BridgetBowen commented on Do Not Remain…

08-05-2009

My sadness should be affecting the stars...This is truly great. Once again your cry reaches into my core.

lovebastard commented on Do Not Remain…

03-28-2009

Two pairs of eyes, one sight... Your poem so raw, so beautiful.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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