Do That Again Please


  • Passion
  • ,
  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    I felt this appropriate with Valentines Day quickly approaching. The meter is a bit off, however I believe that the reader will find a way to relate to the full intent of the subject matter. jh

    Do That Again Please

    Looking out the door, through the window, I peeked under the floor to 
    see the ceiling
         I saw something there, clear as air, yet not so revealing

    There you were laying face down and looking up at the sky
         But I did not stop to stare, I just stumbled on by

    Things were a bit out of place, I must admit
         Though oddly misshapen, it seemed a perfect fit

    So I stood on my head to view where I had been
         Then out of nowhere, there you were again

    Every time you appeared I forgot what I was thinking
         I felt dain bramaged, but I hadn't been drinking

    Ah, at last now I am beginning to recall
         The mixed up feelings weren't a result of hitting my head or even a fall

    There is a simple reason for all of my crazy euphoric bliss
         It's all because of that one incredible - amazing - earth shattering KISS

    "KISS Me Again PLEASE!!!"

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    optimistic commented on Do That Again Please


    I did not expect the poem to go in that direction good thought to twist it a little in my thought great poem.

    1990lh commented on Do That Again Please


    oh nice write soul, i loved the ending, nothing like a lingering kiss leaving you wanting more ahahaha



    Nothing like that KISS! Thank you

    Marsink commented on Do That Again Please


    There is a time for most people for what is considered the 'perfect Kiss'. The world is moved, removed and set spinning again. You have taken me back in time on your rhyme machine, and I thank you!



    Oh yes, oh yes.... that shooting star KISS! Don't we just love to reminiss?! Thank you!!

    lunamarie commented on Do That Again Please


    ... hmmmm ... I think I bump into things ... haha ............ Luna



    Thank you - Again!

    MarionYost commented on Do That Again Please


    hahaha, This is simply adorable I love the "daim Bramaged" Very cute write Definitely a 10 and in my Faves! All the best -Marion-



    Why Thank YOU! So thankful that you liked it so much..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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